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Over 2 minute wait for mine for first play.I gave up waiting, went and did laundry. Cane back, and it was up finally.

You have to use mega app for anything over a gig and not the browser. Otherwise it will likely just dump the download partway through ir give you the yellow error message.

Not sure if this applies, but Android app took up to two minutes to actually start up on mine. Blackscreen for that wait period. Thought it crashed, but was just initializing.

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MC: "Lilly meet Android/VR Sim Lilly."

MC: "Queen Eva meet Bro-con and soon-to-be android/Skynet Eva."

MC: "Ladies...   I only have a few things to say."

MC: " MOR-TAL KOM-BAT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT!"

MC: "CRITICAL HIT!"

MC: "FINISH HIM!"

MC: "FA-TAL-I-TY!"

MC: "SUB-ZERO EVA WINS!" 

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*SPOILER ALERT*

Question, in chapter 14 with the VR scenario, is that supposed to be the 'Crazy Lilly' from the personality alteration option in Season 1? Because, I didn't delete the VR, and I didn't go that route of changing Lilly's personality, but that's what showed up in Season 2. I went the route of just visiting the VR copies of Lilly and Eva, where it ends with Lilly running you off. Oddly, enough, that route felt like it was missing a lot of content interactions with Eva. I probably missed something somewhere. (Eva didn't accidently lock Lilly out of the house for 6 months, just because the phone didn't work when Lilly tried to call Eva to tell her that she lost her house keys...right? Hehe.)

Question: In the escape scene from ConVitae (or whatever it was called), there are 5 storage pods in the storage facility. Is there supposed to be 5 people in cold storage or only 4? Because I keep running the game to that point and can't figure out who I'm missing if it's supposed to be 5 people. Are there optional characters that could or might join your crew? (I mean, technically, you could have kidnapped the Doctor Girl as you left ConVitae as a later character option, but not for the missing 5th.) The girl from the milk factory? Melody, the girl from the Milk Mob Boss (G* something)? Or other [Optional characters]?

Sure, there's some other questions, but that's all I can think of at the moment (other than I've got a wicked sense of Deja Vu with the newer chapters for some reason. I mean, it hasn't even reached that point, but I actually have an image of the Warrior Women's planet blowing up because of those giant bugs - they were trapped on that planet and considered a galatic plague or something, so boom, someone blasted the place or something -  but that would be a near end game thing and the current chapters don't come even close. So...yeah...wicked Deja Vu going on).

Apologies for be a critic. Wasn't intended that way.

game's pretty dead. 

Try to avoid the jerk dates and the game runs straight into a dead end.

not sure if the author realized this or not, but most girls will avoid people who act like that, unless they've known them for years...

maybe it was someone else's modding the early release?  Can't think of anything else it could've been. Green girl still had the Starwars tentacles, so...  hmm.  Anyway...

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great! i'll let you get back to it then.  

btw, did you ever release a more complete version of the game way back? i keep remembering certian things happening that are not even touched upon in v.011.  (follow ups on the brovine larva; the MC getting involved with the guys during the body delivery (gay subplot); meeting the MCs grandfather; the MC getting captured, altered and sold as a sex slave (bad end, this one might have been a stress dream though, not sure about it); um... Hmm. had more, but just went totally blank. those are the ones i recall anyway, besides him maybe sneaking into a party and banging his mom by accident or something?)

Anyway, those glowing green eggs you ordered from the adult novelty shop for christmas are back ordered. something about low factory production issues. they should be sending them to your friends soon!  XD

I know the pregnancy issue is not implemented yet, but have you considered that you have much of the foundation for it already in place? For instance, you need a geneticist to borrow the fast track ability of the parasites from the party. Or someone could collect the plants or mushrooms from the Amazon world. And so on and so forth. I mean there's the potion from the Hero party used for guaranteed knocking someone up, too.

Just thinking that the branch choices are pretty limited. Great story, but not really anything interactive, such as being able to explore/walk around, interact, or whatnot. I mean, being able to take the aunt for a picnic on the Amazon world only for her to learn more about the native plants and animals would seem likely. Hmm... Lost my train of thought. 

Anyway, I thought there would be more reader's choice by chapter 11. There's the scene where he grabs the pen to escape the lab. It's an ideal spot for an alternative storyline. I mean, what would happen if he DIDN'T grab the pen? Hmm? Or if the people he was imprisoned with had actually been randomly selected instead, each playthrough?

As for the pregnancy... It says (optional). But it isn't. Usually, this would mean checking a Y/N box at the start of the game. Here, it's mentioned, but not implemented. Really, it should be a consequence of the MCs actions. I mean if he knocked up the Asian girl right at the start, he'd really have to deal with it through the entire game - if it's a normal human pregnancy, which isn't certain - there ARE options. Alternative solutions, storylines, and such.

Really wanted to see where the virtual sisters storyline was going. But the two options just sorta stop with the ship wreck. I keep thinking: What if his real sisters found it? What if the virtual sisters escaped as androids or holograms? Weird part is doesn't he actually tell the first one that she is a program? It never seems to come back up.

Oh. And who's to say that biological modification CAN'T make the one going through gender change into a completely functional dual gender, like Ziv, or fully female, or only as they are now? (Men can get pregnant in real life now with a pseudo womb, so ...)

Err... Lot more to say. Hell, I'd probably walk step by step through the whole story with suggestions and alternative paths, but... I'd best shut up now, yes?

Great stuff! Even without the adult content! Just like the story...even when the attendant was still a starwars escapee (Twi'lik? Twi'lick? Something...)

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don't know if it's been changed, but if the date is the one after they get off work, there was an option to do something else at one point. Just going home or something? have to play the new version to remember. Personally, Steve? Makes my hair stand on end. This type of guy sets off all kinds of alarm bells in my head.

Well, there are a lot of uses for it. Not just for a "bad ending" type with the Main Character, but the sub characters too. Perhaps the Kurdle/bunnies infest the town or something. Perhaps invading the Witch's hut for "personal payback".  Hmm...  Lots of things that could happen.  Of course, the MC or his team mate could end up a bunny breeder mommy by accident, but well, that's up to World Creator Feyada, no?  

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Lookin' good!

Don't know if you played that old game (they never finished it), but it is similar to yours, so may give you some ideas on what to do later (or what not to do).

Escape from Titan by Cute Pixel (itch.io)

oh, and there's a visual novel, what was the name again? um... Creature Get. Just tossing that over your way. Like I said, just some ideas.

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do you ever get to use the Six-Legged Kurdle potion again?

was going to try this one, but from the overview, it looks like it's Male-only main character? Bummer. Wanted to play this, due to the name, but with Female Main option and the resulting scenerios that'd result in a Vyking world for a mortal Valkyrie.

After all, the game title does happen to be "Vyking's Daughter."

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Still only parasite-only for options? 

Last time I played, you couldn't do anything with others unless you had an active parasite in your body (chapter 3?)

Lot of other stuff to ask about, but can't think of it at the moment...

Dev stated sometime ago that at that point you would only be able to proceed by using the cheat buttons at the beginning of the game to go to the next chapters. I assumed they had at least the next two chapters up and completed before switching it over to pay-to-play, but guess it hasn't been changed much. Would be nice if they put the free browser version back up for test runs, but not seeing it here...

"...a million times over..."

Suddenly having Aliens movie flashbacks.  o.O

but hey! Take your inspiration where you can get it, right?

H. R. Giger was a good source.  

Still, this game reminds me of an old early PS game, but the whole maps was procedurally generated in that one (can't remember the name). So on start up, you NEVER played the same map twice! Kinda buggy though, as accessways could end up perma-locked, because the door keypad might appear inside a wall at times. but anyway...

ah...  that cr@p fricks up everything...  Must've forgotten to do it when testing the game out last time... Such a simple thing to forget.  

Alrighty then! Going to try it again!  :)

probably should do something about the sudden death pregnancy...

maybe have her lay eggs? as part of missions, etc?

maybe add a "monster mutation device"? she collects the - ehem! - and uses that to create/mutate new monsters, new abilities, or...herself?

...maybe work on Level 2? Would recommend using an random auto-map generator or something to spice things up in areas that are not critical/fixed rooms.

just thinking that as time passes and more encounters happen, she changes...bit by bit...for good or ill.

you know?

hmm.

game is either severely incomplete, as choices disappear if not selected, or has a lot of dead end loops right at the beginning, requiring one to restart the game constantly...

tried this game, but it crashes on loading. Something about requiring other programs to run. However, which program is not mentioned here or in the game files.  :\

tried this one, but couldn't get it to do more than walk around the lobby. Couldn't get the game to interact with anything other than the big hologram menu. There was an invisible wall preventing movement towards the reception desk.

it's a good setup, and was just getting really interested in the storyline.

however...

unfortunately, Pointer-V crashes every time when I reach the jail scene, and switches back to the native language.

The standard game commands [auto, skip, Q.save, etc.] vanish from the bottom of the screen pretty early on as well.

early on, you have to take her out to eat shortly after you first meet her and Brody arguing. Its very early in, like during the first week - well before anyone else actually.

The medical term/word you're looking for is:

[INCONTINENCE - a lack of voluntary control over urination or defecation. "causes of urinary incontinence".]

so called "squirt" is literally her inability to control her blader during an organism because of intense muscle spasms - she just unintentionally urinated everywhere...

Awesome!

no bug... 

t'was stupid Microsoft Win10.  

thanks. Wasn't even aware of this issue.

C:\Program Files\LonaRPG.DEMO

not sure how/where to check the write&read setup, though to make sure its not redirecting the .sav to a temp.

Game Demo (and actual game?) crashes when Auto-Save tries to save the game automatically during gameplay. Have to reopen the game and start over from the Tutorial.

Suggestion: Allow some kind of temporary save feature?

Suggestion: ....or just TURN OFF the Auto-Save feature, since it can't be used in the Demo version and just crashes the game a couple of minutes in. 

(Note: After 20 attempts and crashes fighting rats, she finally reached the first Orc/Goblins at the end of the rat sewer - THEN it crashed....again....)

Suggestion: Add a (Skip Tutorial) feature at the start of the game.